TO DO...

There is still quite a bit of the powerpoint that need editing and more to be added.

1. Your slide on the brandzine...the font needs to be changed to make it consistent with the rest of the presentation. also, is that the front of the magazine/website? i think it needs to be made more clear of whether there is a website or just the brandzine?..places to turn the page/page numbers ect. just more visual detail of what it will actually look like on the consumers computer.
   
2. On your statistics slide, the font needs to be changed. make sure it's 'go long' or 'lane narrow'
   
3. When you talk about your promotion (the projection) are you putting another slide with that?
   
4. Do you have a slide to go with your competitors at brand level?

im kind of worried that you might not have enough slides to tick off all the points of your brief

Thaaaaanks guys

mily